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Led an AI team to build a water-quality model used by our city.
“带领”和“城市采用”都需要进一步确认。现有记录只写了个人分工和校内展示。The leadership role and city adoption need clarification. The records describe individual tasks and a school presentation.
一段经历，几份材料。把你的工作、留下的记录和写下的文字放在一起，看看哪里还没讲清楚。One experience can appear across several documents. Connect what you did with your records and your writing, and see what needs a clearer explanation.
试着改一段Try a revision合成案例体验 · 无需提交材料Synthetic demo · no documents needed
一句话，藏着两个问号。One sentence. Two open questions.
Led an AI team to build a water-quality model used by our city.
记录是否支持“领导团队”和“城市采用”？切到来源，看看已有材料写了什么。Do the records support “led” and “used by our city”? Open Sources to compare.
先看本人做了什么。Start with the work you did.
四人协作；本人清洗 240 条记录、测试基线模型；成果在校内展示。Four people worked together. The student cleaned 240 records and tested a baseline model. The team presented it at school.
这份合成记录没有说明谁领导团队，也没有城市采用的记录。连线表示材料关联，不是事实认证。These fictional records name no team leader and record no city use. A connection shows a source relationship, not verification.
把贡献写清楚，保留成果边界。Name your contribution. Keep the scope clear.
Cleaned 240 records and tested a baseline model in a four-person team; presented our water-quality prototype at school.
示例新稿写出了本人工作与校内展示。“城市采用”仍未获支持，所以没有写入。The example names the student’s work and school presentation. City use remains unsupported and is left out.
内容与切换结果均为预设，不会运行 AI 审阅。All content and transitions are scripted. No AI review runs here.
一段团队科研，写成“带领项目”，读者可能以为学生负责了整个研究。另一段活动，宣传触达的人数被写成实际参与人数。问题落在几句话里，却会改变别人对整段经历的理解。A team project described as “led the research” can make a student sound responsible for the entire study. An outreach figure can read like a participant count. A few words can change how the whole experience is understood.
Veristory 正在把现有的材料核查与关系图，扩展为申请审阅和实际修订。新的交付要解释哪里容易误读、依据什么修改，再检查新稿是否讲清楚了。你可以先用合成案例体验这套过程。Veristory is expanding its material checks and relationship maps into application review and revision. The new service will explain a possible misreading, connect each change to the facts, and check how the revised text reads. You can explore that process in a synthetic example.
目前可查看材料核查报告、关系图与备证建议。修订工作台使用全合成材料和预设阅读结果，供你体验新流程；它尚未接入真实申请材料的在线 AI 审阅。You can view material-check reports, relationship maps and evidence preparation guidance today. The revision workbench uses synthetic materials and preset reading results to demonstrate the new process. It does not yet offer online AI review of real applications.
Led an AI team to build a water-quality model used by our city.
“带领”和“城市采用”都需要进一步确认。现有记录只写了个人分工和校内展示。The leadership role and city adoption need clarification. The records describe individual tasks and a school presentation.
Cleaned 240 records and tested a baseline water-quality model in a four-person team; presented our prototype at a school poster session.
写清本人做了什么，成果到了哪一步。每处变化都能回到所给记录中核对。Name the work you did and how far the project went. Each change can be checked against the supplied record.
这段示范使用虚构材料。正式修改需要学生核对事实，并按目标学校的写作要求完成。This example uses fictional materials. Students need to check the facts and follow their target school’s writing requirements.
打开修改工作台Open the workbench ↗先确认你想解决的问题和本次材料范围。费用与交付日期以约定为准。We first agree on the question to address and which materials to review. Fees and delivery dates are confirmed for that scope.
说明已有初稿、目标学校和最想核对的部分。我们先确认哪些现有检查适用，哪些需求属于仍在准备的修订服务。Tell us about your draft, target schools and main concern. We identify the checks available now and any requests that belong to the revision service still in preparation.
确认数据使用与保留条款后，提供约定材料。原生 PDF 更便于核对；推荐信仅在有权分享时提供，不要求获取保密推荐信。After agreeing to the data terms, provide the selected files. Native PDFs are easier to check. Share recommendation letters only when authorized; confidential letters are not required.
系统检查日期、数字和跨材料表述，整理关系图。可查询的官方记录按来源范围核对；无法确认的内容保留说明。The system checks dates, figures and statements across files and builds a relationship map. Official records are checked where available; unresolved items retain their limits.
复核人回看原文，删除依据不足的发现，检查行动建议是否适合这份材料。A reviewer checks the source text, removes unsupported findings and checks whether the preparation steps fit the materials.
交付中英报告、关系图和准备清单。你可以逐条查看原文摘录、需要确认的事实，以及可以寻找的记录。Receive the bilingual reports, relationship map and preparation checklist. Review source excerpts, facts to clarify and records to gather.
目前通过介绍人或已有联系方式安排咨询。修订工作台可直接浏览，无需提交学生材料。Consultations are currently arranged through referrals or existing contacts. You can explore the revision workbench without submitting student materials.