一句话的变化 · 合成案例A sentence, revised · synthetic example
把“我参与了”写具体。Make your part clear.
01 / 原稿Original
Led an AI team to build a water-quality model used by our city.
“带领”和“城市采用”都需要进一步确认。现有记录只写了个人分工和校内展示。The leadership role and city adoption need clarification. The records describe individual tasks and a school presentation.
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02 / 修改示范Revision example
Cleaned 240 records and tested a baseline water-quality model in a four-person team; presented our prototype at a school poster session.
写清本人做了什么,成果到了哪一步。每处变化都能回到所给记录中核对。Name the work you did and how far the project went. Each change can be checked against the supplied record.
这段示范使用虚构材料。正式修改需要学生核对事实,并按目标学校的写作要求完成。This example uses fictional materials. Students need to check the facts and follow their target school’s writing requirements.
一份经人工复核的报告,含交互 HTML 与中英双语 PDF,带水印和编号:A human-reviewed report with interactive HTML and Chinese and English PDFs, watermarked and numbered:
申请材料关系图:连接课程、活动、荣誉与材料片段;在交互报告中点开节点查看详情,按准备优先级找到需要先处理的部分Application evidence map — explore coursework, activities, honors and material fragments; open nodes in the interactive report and identify what needs attention first
学生基本情况,以及课程、活动和成果在材料中的联系Student profile and the connections between coursework, activities and outputs
一页总览:一共几条、分别有多要紧、几个奖已经核实了At a glance: total findings, high/medium/low distribution, share of honors confirmed
每个奖项逐条写清:在主办方公开名单里找到了,还是当前名单里没有对应记录Honor table — found on the organizer’s public list, or no matching record on the lists we can search
主要项目:每条附原文摘录,给一个 0–100 的准备优先级分,再列出下一步、获取对象与资料形式;记录缺失时说明如何核对现有事实Items to work through — each with the source passage, a 0–100 preparation priority, and next steps, people to ask and record formats; gaps prompt a check of the available facts
追问演练:针对材料的细节题,让孩子先用自己的话讲一遍——做了什么、怎么做的、当时留下了哪些记录Follow-up practice — detail questions grounded in the file for your child to answer in their own words: what they did, how, and what records remain
最后一页总结,外加一张可以打印出来逐条打勾的证据清单Key issues summary, plus a printable evidence checklist
这份报告怎么用,三步说清How to use the report: a three-step plan
样例一 · 物理方向Sample 1 · Physics
物理方向的合成材料,用来查看核查报告的结构与准备建议。Synthetic physics materials illustrating the report format and preparation guidance.
这三份核查样例的学生、学校和项目均为虚构,用于展示现有报告。可以打开完整 PDF 和交互关系图。新的修订流程另见合成工作台。The students, schools and projects in these material-check samples are fictional. Open the full PDFs and interactive graphs to explore the existing reports. The synthetic workbench demonstrates the new revision process.
关系图连接课程、活动、荣誉与材料片段。点开节点看来源文档编号和抽取摘要,再结合报告发现中的原文摘录核对。它目前不提供一键跳到 PDF 原文页码的功能。The graph connects coursework, activities, honors and material fragments. Open a node for source document IDs and extracted summaries, then consult the excerpts in report findings. It does not currently link directly to original PDF page numbers.
怎么做出来的Behind the report
怎么做出来的How it is produced
系统先把材料整体过一遍:时间能不能对上、课程和科研之间有没有跳步、每段经历有没有联系人/记录/成果、奖项在公开名单里能不能找到、文件元数据有没有前后不一致、字段和字数符不符合 Common App 当期规则。然后由人看回原文:删掉依据不足的提示,把太重的措辞改成具体问题,再出报告。An automated pass goes over the whole file first: whether the dates line up, whether the coursework and the research skip a step, whether each experience has a contact, a record or an output behind it, whether the awards appear on public lists, whether file metadata is internally inconsistent, and whether every field meets the current Common App rules. Then a person reads each item against the source: anything thinly supported is deleted, anything worded too heavily becomes a specific question.